译文批改 | 各校MTI历年经典真题难句带练（九）

1. 拆解**层

主语：China’s miraculous economic growth；

谓语 1：transformed the global landscape；

谓语 2：defies existing economic theories。

2. 断开中文流水句，另起状语框架

Within the traditional theoretical framework of economics；

转换主语：this growth phenomenon；

3. 处理四个引号并列

统一为名词性概念，对应学界评论口吻：contradictions, impossibilities, anomalies and counterintuitions。

4. 句式衔接

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比较篇学术的版本

China’s miraculous economic growth has not only transformed the global landscape but also defies existing economic theories. Within the traditional theoretical framework of economics, this growth phenomenon is replete with “contradictions”, “impossibilities”, “anomalies” and “counterintuitions”.

适合在考场快速成型的版本

China’s miraculous economic growth has reshaped the global order and baffled prevailing economic theories. From the perspective of conventional economic theories, China’s growth is rife with “contradictions”, “impossibilities”, “anomalies” and “counterintuitions”.